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一篇5歲兒子寫的小文
送交者: mimima 2005年12月21日14:27:29 於 [海 二 代] 發送悄悄話

貼一篇兒子(5.8歲)昨天放學後在我辦公室里寫的小文。我很驚訝他寫的故事。他讓我幫他打印出來,我就順便貼在這裡,也算show off吧。我知道語法標點有錯,但沒改,準備有空時給他講講。學校里前幾個月幫他測IQ時對他的評價是不Creative, 我現在有點迷惑這Creative 到底是指什莫方面。

Tuesday 20/12/2005

Today Josh, Liam and me were in the dinosaur-graveyard and we were eating grass when all of a sudden… a sharptooth appeared from a tree. Josh said “Little-foot, stay with Grandpa-Diplodocus, because I need fight the Sharptooth.” “Okay,” said Little-foot. Then Josh went to fight the Sharptooth while Grandpa-diplodocus and Little-foot were eating grass. Then Josh came back just in time for a little game called Buzz off you out. Did you know who lose? Josh!!!
Then the Sharptooth came out of the largest tree we were eating. Grandpa-diplodocus said “I will handle this one.” So he did. When he came back they just have a big meeting and a little game of dinosaur-chess.

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