You have a very sweet and sensational voice, also musical. Here are some suggestions for your reference:
1. You can try to raise the key (one step or half step higher), which may be easer for you to bring out best vocal range in your voice, also would help you better expressing the feeling.

2. We call it diction; it means to articulate your words. Even it is a pop song, it still needs clear words and some of the words may need more emphasis than others.


1）这个歌本来是男声的歌，我唱的时候已经将伴奏升了3个key，虽然觉得低音部分还是吃力可是怕伴奏变形严重没敢再升，对我来说确实是调太低了。Unfortunately, having a right key is one of the basic elements for singing.


2）吐字不清的问题我也一直有。可是我还有两外一个毛病，我的其它歌都发音太重，就是唱歌太狠的感觉，一想克服那个毛病，就变成吐字不清。还没有找到正确的方式。继续努力。

Articulation (吐字清晰) doesn’t mean push or punch; it is more to do with your tongue and teeth.

还有几个问题
1. 我唱歌老是觉得气不够用，比如长长的尾音拖不到位，不该喘气的地方必须要换气。。。这个问题是因为我气息控制不好呢，还是就因为我肺活量不够啊？怎么克服？
You didn’t really breath in, or say your breathings sat too high, which are very common for the natural singers (singers who with not training). A singing breathing usually deeper than speaking, it relates to your diaphragm and your lower part of the ribcage. Pay attention to your laughing breathing, which is the motion you should use for singing. The difficult thing to do is to remember, use to this kind of movement, and apply it to your singing.


2. 我觉得自己的声音不清澈，不亮，有点沙沙的，好象蒙着一层灰尘的感觉，这音色应该就是天生的，可是还是想问问是否能通过发音方法能改进一下？
Yes you can. It is still relate your breath and breathing control.

3. 如果想提，是应该反复唱同一首歌吗？比如你多我的那首歌提出了建议，如果想改进，是应该再唱那首歌吗？一首歌唱多了好象会烦：）
Choose a right song and have a purpose practicing, it would be very helpful.
Choosing a RIGHT SONG is depandent on your vocal condition ( vocal range, timber and technique ability), singing style and temperament. It could be a little challenge but not extremely difficult.


Talent + hard work=profession, talent+hard work+luck=success


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