和前兩回不太一樣，這篇好像有點鬆散。主要我也沒有每天盯着她挑毛病，提問題，所以有點信馬由韁。不過讓她“跳躍”着思維似乎也還算正常。看作文的內容，倒是發現不少是她平時閱讀觀察的結果和她的所思所想：KEY WEST是讀書知道的；信用卡自然是看大人常用知道的（她就一直夢想有張信用卡，一刷就可以買任何東西）；坐飛機是去年回國的經驗，嚼口香糖是當時為了預防起飛和降落時耳朵難受；飛機上用電腦自然也是她觀察的結果；參觀美術館是每次出遠門玩的固定節目；最後“下次去中國”的計劃無疑是打算把她中國行的經驗和想象揉合起來。

順便說一句，本文已獲得女兒授權在網上發表，所以版權不是問題（其實是她讓我發的，她總想聽聽別的孩子怎麼說，如草梅的女兒，加愚的兒子，二蛋，等。她看到其他孩子的文章也很感興趣，總有點想與之比比的勁頭，我覺得應當鼓勵，於是不畏“SHOW OFF”的磚頭把它貼上來）。

Rainbow Girls and the Haunted Arcade

Chapter 1 On Children’s Day, the girls were in an airport so they could go to Key West, Florida to spend October. “Just think of what we can do,” dreamed Carson. “I hope we could buy something with these credit cards,” thought Eliza. “Key West, Florida!” The manager called. “There’s our trip!” Cackled Madison. They pulled their suitcases on to the airplane. It was a very big airplane so all the girls got to sit together in rainbow order.

Chapter 2 “Let’s chew gum.” Emma said, and got rainbow gum out of her suitcase. She handed everyone a piece of gum. The plane was just about to fly. Vroom! Ruth Rose took a nap. Sparkle showed Madison how to play her laptop computer without electricity. After a few hours they were at Key West.

Chapter 3 “Yay!” Emma said. When they got out of the airport, they smelled barbecue. “Come on gals.” Melanie said firmly. They went into Florida Hotel. The biggest room in the hotel had 9 beds, a TV, a radio, and a desk. All of them started doing their homework. Just then it was time to swim!

Chapter 4 At the ocean, the girls had lots of fun until a shark came by. “Grass Pins!” Lisa yelled. Some grass nearby began floating to the shark. The grass chased the shark away. “Yay!” The people cheered. The first day had been great. At night, Melanie read “Charlotte’s Web” while Sarah played “Clue Jr.” with Ruth Rose. The others watched “Lizzie McGuire.”

Chapter 5 Next morning, the girls were going to Florida Museum of Art. Carson brought their camera to take pictures of art. Inside the museum they saw lots of pictures hanged on the wall. That night they went to a friend’s house. They spent the night there and they could go to an arcade tomorrow.

Chapter 6 On Wednesday, the girls went to the arcade. They had so much fun until it was night. Ninjas came out. Carson went up. “Golden Beam.” She said quietly. A golden light started to glow. The glow went towards the ninjas, but it caught nine. “Rainbow Double Kick!” Melanie gave two of the ninjas a big kick.

Chapter 7 “Sun Burn, Sky Fall, Grape Tornado, Flower Twirl, and Orange Blast!” Eliza, Emma, Sparkle, Madison, and Ruth Rose said together. A purple tornado came by, with flowers on the top, then they saw the tornado turn blue. Orange-yellow fireworks popped outside the tornado. “Duck!” Screamed Sarah.

Chapter 8 The tornado blew the ninjas away. Then a voice came from behind the golf game. “I am the Ghost of the Arcade.” The voice said. “Stuns Pore, Carrot Leach Life, Apple Throw, Cherry Crash, Rainbow Scratch, Water Gun!” Eliza, Ruth Rose, Sarah, Melanie, and Emma yelled together.

Chapter 9 A black cloud came by. It rained yellow dust, carrots, apples, cherries, rainbow lines, and water. “Ou!” Said the ghost. “I am Bad Boy Black! You beat me!” The ghost ran off crying. At Halloween, the girls dressed in rainbow clothing. They got a lot of candy, especially Kit Kats and Hershey bars. Chapter 10 Back at school they wrote a survey and got A+! The next time they plan to go to China for all the places they will go. “Good!” Thought Larry. He planed to give them the gun but he didn’t. “Dad! They beat me!” It was Sammy. He was in a hospital. “It’s all right.” Larry whispered.