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一篇5岁儿子写的小文
送交者: mimima 2005年12月21日14:27:29 于 [海 二 代] 发送悄悄话

贴一篇儿子(5.8岁)昨天放学后在我办公室里写的小文。我很惊讶他写的故事。他让我帮他打印出来,我就顺便贴在这里,也算show off吧。我知道语法标点有错,但没改,准备有空时给他讲讲。学校里前几个月帮他测IQ时对他的评价是不Creative, 我现在有点迷惑这Creative 到底是指什莫方面。

Tuesday 20/12/2005

Today Josh, Liam and me were in the dinosaur-graveyard and we were eating grass when all of a sudden… a sharptooth appeared from a tree. Josh said “Little-foot, stay with Grandpa-Diplodocus, because I need fight the Sharptooth.” “Okay,” said Little-foot. Then Josh went to fight the Sharptooth while Grandpa-diplodocus and Little-foot were eating grass. Then Josh came back just in time for a little game called Buzz off you out. Did you know who lose? Josh!!!
Then the Sharptooth came out of the largest tree we were eating. Grandpa-diplodocus said “I will handle this one.” So he did. When he came back they just have a big meeting and a little game of dinosaur-chess.

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