得到"儿童成长" 网友们的鼓励, 儿子兴致勃勃地继续写他的幻想星球大战小说.
他的写作风格主要模仿"Ricky Ricootta's Mighty Robot". 故事似乎越写越长,
细节也多了一些. 故事还是发生在地球一个叫Sportsville 的地方, 主角还是Mighty
Tennis Ball Robot, 这次的敌人the Mutant Steamrollers 来自金星, 想占有地球.
应他的要求 把习作贴在这里.
Mighty Tennis Ball Robot vs. the Mutant Steamrollers from Venus
Chapter 1: Sergeant Steamroller
About 69 days to a flat planet called Venus which was flatten up by flatter steamrollers. On the surface it was pretty weird because…the entire planet was flat! The steamroller people were dim-witted. So was Sergeant Steamroller sometimes. He was the ruler of the planet Venus.
Chapter 2: The Bad Day
One day, Sergeant Steamroller hated his planet because that his sneakers were melting down from his walking hind wheels and stood there like stuck on a bubble gum. On the ground there was lots of lava. The climate is about 900 degrees in the planet.
Then he stepped on the geyser. There was a sign showed: WARNING! SHOOT YOU UP IN 3 SECONDS. Sergeant Steamroller was shouted up in the air and was landed in a thud and his front wheel had deflated.
“How bad is it here!” he thought. He wanted having another planet to live.
Chapter 3: His Evil Plots
He went backed to his palace.
In the secret laboratory, he was looking with the microtelescope for sight of another planet, but nothing seemed right. At last, he found the planet Earth, where he found some sports toys were happily playing in the autumn day. “The planet Earth is a good place for me,” said Sergeant Steamroller.
Chapter 4: The Wheelnails
Sergeant Steamroller had to think of something else. He decided to clip his wheelnails.
“I wonder if my wheelnails are filthy,” he wondered.
He checked his wheelnails; in deed, there were filthy, and especially funky. It needed to be clipped. He carefully clipped his wheelnails.
Chapter 5: The Mutant Steamrollers
After Sergeant Steamroller clipped his wheelnails, he placed them on the gigantic plate in the middle of the laboratory. Sergeant Steamroller sat on a seat. In the front of him, there were the controllers. He had many laser machines. He pulled the lever to the energy to one of lasers which is hung up on the ceiling. The laser that Sergeant Steamroller was using was: Grow-Up-O-Tron 5000. The Grow-Up-O-Tron 5000 zapped the clipped wheelnails, which caused them to grow. The clipped wheelnails grew and grew and grew… until the wheelnails was completely full grown. They were Mutant Steamrollers. Sergeant Steamrollers got six Mutant Steamrollers.
Chapter 6: The Lift Off
Sergeant Steamroller suspiciously looked at the Mutant Steamrollers. He decided they’re going to be his warriors. Sergeant Steamroller and his warriors hopped on the spaceship, and flew toward for the planet Earth.
Chapter 7: Who’s in Charge of the Earth?
One day, two days, three days…, the spaceship were keeping flying.
Sixty nine day flying in the spaceship made Sergeant Steamroller was exhausted.
His warriors were discussing about the planet Earth.
Shortly, they arrived at the sky of the Earth, but didn’t land yet.
“First,” sneer evil Sergeant, “we got to find who is in charge of the Earth. When we found them, we’ll kidnap them.”
However, they didn’t even found any king, queen, prince or the princess. At last they gave up. They found a very beautiful city where there were many stadiums, and the sport fields and playgrounds. It was Sportsville City!
“It was exactly what I had seen with my telescope in the Venus!” clamored Sergeant Steamroller.
Chapter 8: Touch Down!
So Sergeant Steamroller turned the spaceship toward the Earth to land. While they flying down, they put out the parachutes to land safely. Quickly, they landed on… Sportsville.
“All right,” yelled Sergeant Steamroller to his army, “Let’s destroy Sportsville!”
Chapter 9: Over attacked!
“RRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!” many buildings and houses were collapsed, as Sergeant’s warriors attack the city.
Many people heard the rumble and screamed in the horror. The warriors were listing the commander’s commands. Smart people were kidnapped to be their slaves.
Chapter 10: Here Came Our Hero
Many miles away from Sportsville, Tennis Ball Robot was at the school house, giving children the free ride. He just landed for the last group to get off. He heard the screams from the city. The city was over attack! The Tennis Ball Robot flew away.
Chapter 11: The War Begins
“Help! Help! We want Tennis Ball Robot!” chanted the people in Sportsville again.
Very soon, the tremendous Tennis Ball Robot showed up just in time. The people stopped chanting.
“So,” said Tennis Ball Robot in the computerized voice.
“Oh, this is another kind of the villain. Would you declare a battle?” he asked.
“If you want,” said one of the warriors.
They leaped close.
Now the battle begins!
Chapter 12: The Battle (part 1)
The warriors jumped toward Tennis Ball Robot to try to smash him but landed in a heap and missed. They got their bellies hit the ground.
Chapter 13: “We Interrupted This Chapter for a Moment!”
Few blocks away, Mr. Ricky Ingrid, a news program director, appeared on the TV.
“We have to interrupt this show to tell the breaking news,” he said.
“Here are some latest developments via satellite: Sportsville has been over attack, but Tennis Ball Robot showed up in time to fight these criminals.” reported Mr. O’Mac.
“I am showing these pictures of these villains.” Mr. O’Mac continued. “These creatures must come back soon after couple of hours .This is Zarrow O’Mac’s report from Sportsville. Thanks, Mr. Ingrid.” Mr.O’ Mac finally said, back to the original show.
Chapter 14: The Battle (Part 2)
The Tennis Ball Robot was still busy battling the warriors: slamming, crushing, punching and poking each of them in the eye. After a few hours of the war, the Tennis Ball Robot had defeated the warriors. Now the warriors had shrunk into toy steamroller action figures.
Chapter 15: Meanwhile, at the Spaceship…
Meanwhile, in the middle of Sportsville, at the spaceship, Sergeant Steamroller was very angrily. He growled and pulled a secret lever and the spaceship was transformed into a robotic Samurai Steamroller.
Oh No!
Chapter 16: Not Again!
Tennis Ball Robot heard some stomping and the commotion of people screams. He found out what had happen and flew away to the scene. He levered over the robotic Samurai Steamroller. They both were ready for the battle – again!
Chapter 17: The Battle - again!
The Tennis Ball Robot and the robotic Samurai Steamroller leaped close together as they got their robotic foreheads bump very uncontrollable. The Samurai Steamroller punched Tennis Ball Robot on the chin which made his neck to extend. Tennis Ball Robot turned extra large, larger than the robotic Samurai Steamroller. He crushed the tiny speck foe.
Chapter 18: The War Ended
The Tennis Ball Robot shrinked himself into his normal size and free the smart people. People in Sportsville cheered of the foes defeated.
Chapter 19: the Big Bang
Rapidly, the ground started to quiver and rocking violently. The robotic Samurai Steamroller was going to explode! Quick as a lightning, the Tennis Ball Robot grab it flew into sky and almost left the regions of the Earth’s atmosphere. KA-BOOM! The faraway speck disappears in the electric air of smoke.
Chapter 20: The Fall
Tennis Ball Robot and Sergeant Steamroller were falling from the smoke. The pieces of the spaceship all falling like a meteor shower. At last, after a long time of falling, Sergeant Steamroller got his head stuck in the ground, as quick as a lightning. The Tennis Ball Robot pushed one of the buttons and the rocket boosters lit up, and he flew up as he almost hit the ground. He finally landed safely.
Chapter 21: Off to Jail
The Tennis Ball Robot unearthed Sergeant Steamroller, picked him up, opened the roof of Sportsville Jail and dropped him in his room right next to Mecha-Nail. Dr. McEvinasty was there too, right beside Mecha-Nail’s room.
Other Sergeants were also arrested. The Tennis Ball Robot dumped the Sergeant’s warriors who already shrunk into the toy steamroller action figures into the stinky, smelly city sewer drain.
Chapter 22: Back to Normal
Many fire engines came to put out the fire, but red hot fire didn’t go out. So they let it to put out itself.
Lots of months, Sportsville was rebuilt. Everything was back to normal.