儿子的第四本章回故事出笼了. 依然是星球大战, 这次敌人来自火星. 故事的结构
, 套路与前几本有些类似. 我建议他要构思一点新的套路. 他说下一本试试.
Mighty Tennis Ball Robot vs. the Voodoo Strong Cements from Mars
Chapter 1: Stealing Cements
There was a store which was named Home Build.
One night, a space cement guy broke into the store, stole lots of sacks of cement, threw it in the spaceship and flew away.
Chapter 2: Mr. Cement
It took about seven months to get to a cube shape and gray planet called Mars, which is not around planet. On the surface it was extremely weird. There were buildings which were cube or rectangular shaped. The rivers were hardened; waterfalls let cement flow over into the river and then dried into hard cement. The entire planet was made of rocky wet or dry cement.
Chapter 3: Things about Mr. Cement
Since Mr. Cement was a ruler of Mars, he always forced his workers to plant rocks or break up the rocks to eat and build up his gigantic castle. If anybody refused, he would put them in the jail cell.
Chapter 4: The Evil Plots
Today, Mr. Cement got fed up.
“Ugh!!!” he yelled. “This place is black and white in color! I really wanted another planet to live on!” He went to his laboratory, looked in the high energy telescope but the planets were no good as he looked at the Earth. The planet Earth had many sorts of colors.
“Hmmm…” he wondered, “I think the Earth is a good planet. I need to take over that planet for once and for all!!”
He began to work.
Chapter 5: The warrior
Mr. Cement now planned out how to take over.
First thing he would do is to build many armies, but he didn’t know how to make so many of them. So he made some machinery to build up the robot voodoo army and then he took it apart. Very soon, after a few hours of building and adjusting, it was completed. It was only one robot voodoo warrior. He had to think about it. Finally, he got an idea. He took the robot warrior to the corner of the laboratory where an over size (which meant mega size) 9-volt battery and a laser that multiplies.
Chapter 6: Watch it Multiplies!
Mr. Cement set the robotic warrior down and connected the two wires from the gigantic 9-volt battery. And then, he put on his safety goggles and aimed the laser that multiplies.
He worked on the scientific calculations to figure out how many warriors he wanted. “Hmmm…” he wondered. So he wanted more than a thousand, and pushed the start button. The high electric tone was so loud that it could be heard in the entire laboratory. BLAAAZZZZT! The electric tone sent the paper flying and books were knocked off the shelves. It let out the smell of burnt matches. Yes, it does it! He whispered to himself as he saw another robotic voodoo warrior made. More and more robotic warriors had appeared. It is multiplying. ZAAAAAAAAAAAAP!
Chapter 7: The Robotic Army
While the laser extractor was blasting, the white light filled the laboratory. It is about to be complete! Very soon, the white light had disappeared. The army only stood there. Now Mr. Cement was almost ready.
Chapter 8: The Spaceship
Since Mr. Cement was almost ready to go to the Earth, he needed to build a spaceship.
“All right,” yelled Mr. Cement, “you needed to build up a spaceship!”
The robotic voodoo army did as they were told one by one. They slid down the sliding pole to the basement. There were lots of materials and machinery.
They climbed up the ladder without losing their footing. They carried boxes that had traps. It was filled with things from the basement. Finally, they reached the top of the ladder which leaded to the laboratory and went to the laboratory’s workshop. They dumped out things that they got from the basement. They started building. It took them three weeks. After three weeks, it was completely finished. They hopped on board and their spaceship started up and flew away and left Mars’s atmosphere.
Chapter 9: Stop the Space Flight
The spaceship is traveling for seven months, with one month to go, Mr. Cement is getting tired of driving it to the Earth. So he paused the engines and made the spaceship stop. He went over to the small refrigerator got some snacks, and rested.
Chapter 10: Touchdown!
While Mr. Cement was getting some rest, a comet hit the spaceship, he was knocked out of his seat while resting and the spaceship was soaring toward the Earth like a shooting star. The spaceship landed on the ground with a thud, but Mr. Cement forgot to put out airbags. BOOM! They were almost killed instantly, but survived. Smoke poured out.
Chapter 11: The Commotion
Mr. Cement and his robotic voodoo army crawled out of the wrecked spaceship now. He looked at the sign, which said: Welcome to Sportsville! The army obeyed the commands, they destroyed the city. People screamed and shouted very loudly.
Chapter 12: The Fight (Different)
Very soon, the National Guard, troops of soldiers, marines, sailors, tanks and helicopters with missiles had arrived to destroy the evil robotic voodoo army, but got themselves over taken and attacked.
Chapter 13: The Mostly Worst News
A few blocks away, in the television in each building, Mr. Ricky Ingrid and Mr. Zarrow O’Mac appeared on the screen, and stopped all TV programs.
“Hello,” said two news reporters, “Today, we had some breaking news.”
“The via satellite news reports were damaged this morning and our apartment TVs went blank that had been caused by the comet like object that landed with a huge explosion in the middle of the park during the sunrise,” said Mr. Ingrid.
“Yes,” said Mr. O’Mac, “and…” after a couple of minutes, he finally said, “back to your program.”
Chapter 14: Our Hero
Far away from Sportsville in the rural area, around the farm, Tennis Ball Robot was scaring the crows in the fields when he heard the distant cries. He stopped what he was doing, to let the farmer do it, and flew away. TBR disappeared over the horizon.
Chapter 15: The Battle Began
After the long flight to Sportsville, TBR had arrived to try to destroy the robotic voodoo army. The army saw him. They leaped close together. The battle would begin!
Chapter 16: The Break Up
Before Tennis Ball Robot reacted, the robotic voodoo army put a wooden cube shaped box around him. Then they poured cement inside. Soon, the cement dried up. Now TBR got trapped, but not for long. He erased the dried cement to make a space. Then, a drill came out and it twirled through, breaking it up the cube shaped cement block. Finally TBR was free.
Chapter 17: Water to the Rescue!
Tennis Ball Robot sneaked toward the water main while the robotic voodoo army was shooting a horrifying laser zapper in Sportsville. He filled up the tanks and formed into a water ball. Then he aimed his gun shaped arm at one of the robotic voodoo warrior. One water ball shot out his gun arm and hit the robotic voodoo warrior. The smoke and sparks began to seep out of robotic body, then it jerked around and exploded in googols of pieces. The others were puzzled. And then, they faced towards TBR. They went closer to him. Now the chase was on!
Chapter 18: The Chase
Now TBR began shooting lot of water balls at the robotic voodoo army. The voodoo robotic army did the exact thing that one of robotic warrior had happen. Very soon, there were few of them left. TBR shot out a metal-roof net at them. Now they were trapped! He tied the net up and then he gave them mighty throw to the ocean. BOOM! They disappeared in the electric air of smoke and got destroyed into googols of pieces.
Chapter 19: Captured
Meanwhile, at the spaceship, Mr. Cement growled very angrily as he went over to the door, which is the robot workshop to the storage closet and a powerful robot emerged. He squeezed through the glass dome and jumped onto the seat and spun around like a zoom. It stopped spinning and moved over to the controller table. He pulled back the gearshift and the robot morphed into a cube. Then under a circle in the floor, was a spring and it flung the robot cube out of the destroyed spaceship and the robot cube unmorphed. The 300 foot robot went over to the Tennis Ball Robot and snatched him tight in its metal fist. TBR was now captured! Will he save the day?
Chapter 20: TBR’s Secret Trick
“Hey, what is that?” asked Tennis Ball Robot in computerized voice.
“Huh? Where?” said Mr. Cement.
“Right behind you,” said TBR, pointing the opposite direction. The 300 foot robot turned around the direction which TBR is pointing. While 300 foot robot was looking, TBR’s eyes turned eerie red. Then, red rays came out of the robotic eyes like a pair of lasers and chopped the arms of the 300 foot robot. Mr. Cement hadn’t realized that the Tennis Ball Robot chopped his robot’s arms. Then, his robot began to lose its balance and crash-landed on the ground. Then TBR began to chop the rest of the body parts of the robot. Then, Mr. Cement crashed and landed in the city sewer drain with a loud splash. Would the battle end?
Chapter 21: Still Working
Mr. Cement climbed out of the city sewer drain with a controller. He was all wet, filthy and stinky. He called his troops to bring an oversize 9-volt battery to him since his controller is out of electricity that happened when the polluted water had soaked it and shocked Mr. Cement temporarily when he forgot to put on the rubber gloves. Finally, the gigantic 9-volt battery had arrived, carried by twenty robotic voodoo warriors from the wrecked spaceship. Now the controller was completely filled with electricity energy.
Then Mr. Cement pressed a button which said: ATTACK HERO on the controller. Suddenly the parts of the 300 foot robot with eyes, mouth, and legs and arms appeared. Then it surrounded the Tennis Ball Robot. They were all ready to attack.
Chapter 22: Cornered
Today, Tennis Ball Robot had now no fuel energy for himself to fly, so he jumped out of the crowd of robotic parts of the 300 foot powerful robot and ran away from them. The others who surrounded him chased after him. They kept running and crashing into and collapsing banks, car wash stations, bridges and other buildings. Then they cornered TBR in the dead end alley. They leaped close. And they sprayed him with Super Stenchy Flour that made Tennis Ball Robot all white.
Chapter 23: Robot Dough
Very soon, all white TBR began to melt into a giant, white floury dough except his robotic eyeballs. He formed into a white glob.
Would you think this was ridiculous that a robot that melt into a giant glob for dough?
Since Tennis Ball Robot got Super Stenchy Spray Flour all over, it seeped inside the robotic bodies and then it turned unbelievably hot and made him melt. TBR dough went away, leaving the large white flat dough to have parts of the 300 foot robot destroy.
Chapter 24: Defeated
The Tennis Ball Robot Dough finally found his predators in the middle of the city. The parts of the 300 foot weren’t looking at him as he scooped up some water from the lake and formed into an oversize water ball and threw it at them, BOOM! They blasted and disappeared in the gigantic cloud of smoke and were destroyed in googols of pieces. Finally, he gave his dead foes a gigantic glob of dough.
