飲酒 
陶淵明

結廬在人境，

而無車馬喧。

問君何能爾，

心遠地自偏。

採菊東籬下，

悠然見南山；

山氣日夕佳，

飛鳥相與還。

此中有真意，

欲辨已忘言。

A drunken mａｎ with clear mind

Written by Yuan Ming Tao

翻譯拜職業老爺爺

There are many mountains could be my home

Without noisy of chase in the city

Should i ask you：if, am I living here?

節奏進入金句：

My heart is quiet and the house is perfect:

Eastern yard giving me the mum

Southern heart presenting me the mountain

While, if the feeling is brilliantly charming with the last piece of her

somewhere birds back their satisfied home

The truth is real grace:

She who with a couples of drinks,
she who with clear mind without complains

（1）職老爺爺

職老同學企圖在結構上有所創新和突破，並力求中國古代詩歌的意境，這個是樓下琵夫人翻譯中所沒有的

這個叫做：創新，是詩歌創作以及再創作以及文學和科研領域的獸藥



(2)琵夫人

琵夫人的這個翻譯英文非常流暢地道，完全擺脫是秦國歷史的素服。

特別是第4句的CHASE非常用的好，pace也有意境，和CHASE對應的非常默契，不留筆痕

而且整體簡明爽利，好！！！！

雖然仍有上升的空間，特別在中國股市的意境和朦朧方面，但已經南能可貴了，首先讚一個，也望同學們學習

Living a life in a busy place

Yet I have nothing to chase

The secret of such grace

Is because I have a quiet pace

 

As I enjoy my daisies under the eastern fence

Looking up far and the south mountain rushes into the scene

The air of the forest around the setting sun is so fresh

embraced the perishing birds returning to their nests

 

So much is beneath the surface

Simply speechless for such a showcase