種豆南山下，
Growing bean plants under mountain of the south, 
--- 俺先入為主的感覺，grow是自動詞“生長”，看豌博譯文一google才知也是“種植”，亦他動詞也。對mountain of south 不習慣，俺肯定譯成southern mountains 呵呵。

草盛豆苗稀。
weeds were rampant while bean seedlings sparse. 
--- 準確流暢！

晨興理荒穢，
Started early morning to clear weeds off wildland,
--- 嗯，准！

帶月荷鋤歸。--- 這句非常詩意，被無數文學作品引用過。“帶月”還是“戴月”一直沒定案。
carried hoes to head home as late as in moonlight. 
--- 感覺這句“帶月”或“戴月”譯作“月光下”，渲染得不過癮。

道狹草木長，
Road was narrow yet the side bushes sticking out, 
--- 好，準確自然。

夕露沾我衣。
my clothes were soaked from dewdrops of dusk. 
--- 好。

衣沾不足惜，
I didn't mind seeing clothes so wet like from rain,
--- 這句陶老暗含轉折，是個小波瀾

但使願無違。
as long as this hard labor would not turn in vain. 
--- 這句的“願”是啥涅？字面上看自然是希望多收豆子了。

豌博這篇譯作非常成功，準確地再現了原文詩意，不失古樸的格調和韻味，很難得。再贊！