| 評詩:綠島兄譯陶淵明《歸田園詩》佳作,賞析幾句: |
| 送交者: 曹雪葵 2015年12月20日12:41:43 於 [詩詞歌賦] 發送悄悄話 |
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Planted peas in the field by the southern-mountain
Weeds taking the ground made the pea shoots thin
I have been weeding and harrowing
From the early morning to the moon rising
Working within the narrow space with grass not low
My clothes are wet by the heavy night dew
It does not matter that my clothes are not clean
Just wish all I have done won’t go in vain!
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