中文原作：《雜詩三首》 唐 王維

君自故鄉來，應知故鄉事。
來日綺窗前，寒梅著花未？

諸詩友譯作列如下，排名不分前後：

試譯《君從故鄉來》王維 送交者: 文思 2016年04月08日

Hello buddy, just from our hometown here?
Happened to know what's going on there?
As you passed my house window that day,
Started the plum flower blooming anyway?

曹評：

押韻的詩句無論中英都是流暢上口的。

 Happened to know what's going on there?
--- 介句省去了主語，肯定為賀蘭兄不喜，哈哈

和文思君翻譯兩首古詩 - 君自故鄉來 送交者: 琴韻 2016年04月08日

Coming from our hometown,
Tell me what is going on.
When you passed by the window of my house,
Did that plum tree bloom along?

曹評： 押韻格式為AABA，恰和七言之首句入韻。詩句淡雅自然。