英译纳兰容若之《梦江南.昏鸦尽》

Away flown all the crows, standing shortly,
How I longed for her, like snowflakes eagerly,
Writhe as catkins into the incense pavillion,
Where she used to stay with my companion.
Only the breeze still sways the plum in vase,
Gray is my heart burnt in the thurible of brass.

纳兰容若原作：
昏鸦尽，小立恨因谁？急雪乍翻香阁絮，轻风吹到胆瓶梅，心字已成灰。

诸位已经知道，俺素著名的英文二把刀，请豌博带头砖一下英文用字。有些字俺只是在看小说时见过，口语里自己根本都木用过。哈哈