英译白居易之《梦江南.江南好》

The charm in the south of the Yangtze River, 
Could always be seen with closing eyes.
While the red flowers burn in the sunrise,
Green water like bluegrass floats with Spring nearer.
By a warming cup of wine against cold,
The longing for the south grows that I can't hold.

白居易原作：
江南好，风景旧曾谙。日出江花红胜火，春来江水绿如蓝，能不忆江南。

俺介是英文二把刀哪，请豌博带头给砖一下用字。