中文原作：《落叶》 孔绍安

早秋惊落叶，飘零似客心。
翻飞未肯下，犹言惜故林。

诸诗友译作如下，排名不分前后：

跟风英译隋朝诗人孔绍安《落叶》 送交者: 豌博 2016年03月27日

“Leaves Falling"

By Sui Dynasty Poet Kong Shaoan
Leaves are shedding startling early in the fall,
floating soulless and anywhere may they stall.
They flip and turn on trees striving to hang on,
like saying the forest turf is where they belong.

曹评：介句 They flip and turn on trees striving to hang on 精彩！奏似不想落下来。哈哈。

试译孔绍安《落叶》 送交者: 边砦 2016年03月26日

It is surprising to see yellow leaves fall in early autumn.
They are drifting desolately like exiled souls at bottom.
Struggling to hang on to the trees, they twist, twirl and sway.
It seems they say “we belong to the woods we used to stay.”

曹评：佩服想象力，译笔灵活。大赞！

试译《落叶》孔绍安 送交者: 文思 2016年03月26日

Leaves falling even in early autumn ,
Like my mind wandering nowhere.
They are circling reluctantly in the air,
As if I were home, not going anywhere.

曹评：原作感人，译得真趣！个人觉得首句“惊”字译得好。而原文后两句的寓意，颇为挑战译笔。

接受豌博鼓励，也译一把《落叶》 曹雪葵 2016年03月27日

A falling Leave

A falling leaf surprised me of an earlier Autumn,
Like a lonely guy away from his childhood home.
It lingers with hearty entangling on the branch ,
As if a hired cowboy at last begins to love the ranch.

自跋：此第一稿也，颇有改进余地，暇时再润。

试译 隋 孔绍安《落叶》 送交者: 贺兰山 2016年03月27日

“ Falling Leaves"
By Sui Dynasty Poet Shaoan Kong

Watching in early autumn the yellow leaves are made to be shedding
As a wanderer,I feel sad and worry where is the room on halting.
They are struggling on the branches and try to hang themselves on,
Mumbling that it is hard to leave the forest for it is our home town.

曹评： 着眼点不同，也很精彩。中文原文似为离枝之叶在空中飘舞而不落的姿态，贺兰兄之译作似为虽摇摇欲坠但还连在枝上之叶的姿态，其不舍之情亦同。

也试英译《落叶》(孔绍安) 送交者: 于文子 2016年03月30日

A falling leaf

Suddenly strikes a leaf, autumn's prelude.
As adrift is the traveler's mood.
Turning over and over, the leaf won't descend,
as if to say, treasure your home, my friend.

曹评：结句出彩儿，大赞！