中文原文：《天净沙·秋思》元 马致远

枯藤老树昏鸦，
小桥流水人家，
古道西风瘦马。
夕阳西下，
断肠人在天涯。

元朝诗人马致远 《天净沙·秋思》英译 送交者: 豌博 2016年03月29日

Desolate Poetry by Yuan Dynasty Poet Ma Zhiyuan
"Pure Sands in the Sky Format: Autumn Mind"
(Depicts the plight and bleak circumstances suffered by the Han Chinese majority under the repressive nomad Mongol regime)

A dark crow on an aging tree encroached by dry vines,
water flows under a mini bridge by a family residence,
skinny horse on ancient road in frigid wind from west. 
As the sun far in the west sets,
man at the distant verge of land and sky sick in the guts.

曹评：用笔精准是豌博的一贯特色！ 

试译 《天净沙·秋思》 元朝诗人马致远 送交者: 文思 2016年03月30日

Dusk shifts to dead vines and old trees,
Where crows are standing on in cries.
Nearby is a farmer village,
A creek crosses a small bridge.
A skinny horse in chilly wind 
Limps on dark rough road.
The sun is set,
The poor rider is just
wandering to no end.

曹评： limp 很传神，马一瘸一拐地，马鞍上一个憔悴的外乡人... 主格调为凄凉即与原作构思意图相符

也试英译【天净沙】秋思(马致远) 送交者: 于文子 2016年03月30日

Withered vines, fading trees and faint crows;
A tiny bridge, nice stream and cozy household;
Westerly winds, a thin horse, and the ancient road；
All are against a backdrop of the sunset.
On the horizon is the desperate man on trek.

曹评：译作的画面很传神：作者在小桥流水处遥望夕照中地平线上，一个外乡人正骑在一匹疲惫的马上远去