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中文原文：《登乐游原》 唐 李商隐

向晚意不适，驱车登古原。
夕阳无限好，只是近黄昏。

唐 李商隐《登乐游原》英译 送交者: 豌博 2016年04月04日

"Hiking on Joy-Tour Terrain" 

Didn't feel well as the day drawing to a close,
away for hiking on the ancient terrain I drove. 
How marvelous the setting sun enchants on,
pitiful near the dusk and won't glow for long.

雪葵戏评：感觉不如拙译传神，马涅？赶车算啥？哈哈哈

试译 《登乐游原》唐 李商隐  送交者: 文思 2016年04月03日

I feel unwell the evening somehow,
Going out and seeking for quiet scenery now.
The moment the twilight is lovely bright
Regretfully, the dark is soon in sight.

曹评：感觉最后两句处理得好，切入角度，别有新意！

跟译李商隐名作《登乐游原》 送交者: 曹雪葵 2016年04月03日

Rein in the galloping horse who cares,
That I'm drunk? At me the sun stares,
Round and red, for help to save from falling.
With the old plane dyed as if it were morning. 

豌评：哈哈错过曹兄这版狂傲放任。。

试译李商隐《登乐游原》 送交者: 边砦 2016年04月03日

Without feeling comfortable at the end of the day,
I drive out to the historic site close to the imperial bay.
What a glorious sunset before my eye!
As long as the twilight were not to follow by.

曹评：大赞边砦兄好译！尾句处理得尤其好： 不说“已近黄昏”，却说“不近黄昏”就好，转折有致！