中文原作：《杂诗三首》 唐 王维

君自故乡来，应知故乡事。
来日绮窗前，寒梅著花未？

诸诗友译作列如下，排名不分前后：

试译《君从故乡来》王维 送交者: 文思 2016年04月08日

Hello buddy, just from our hometown here?
Happened to know what's going on there?
As you passed my house window that day,
Started the plum flower blooming anyway?

曹评：

押韵的诗句无论中英都是流畅上口的。

 Happened to know what's going on there?
--- 介句省去了主语，肯定为贺兰兄不喜，哈哈

和文思君翻译两首古诗 - 君自故乡来 送交者: 琴韵 2016年04月08日

Coming from our hometown,
Tell me what is going on.
When you passed by the window of my house,
Did that plum tree bloom along?

曹评： 押韵格式为AABA，恰和七言之首句入韵。诗句淡雅自然。