饮酒 
陶渊明

结庐在人境，

而无车马喧。

问君何能尔，

心远地自偏。

采菊东篱下，

悠然见南山；

山气日夕佳，

飞鸟相与还。

此中有真意，

欲辨已忘言。

A drunken mａｎ with clear mind

Written by Yuan Ming Tao

翻译拜职业老爷爷

There are many mountains could be my home

Without noisy of chase in the city

Should i ask you：if, am I living here?

节奏进入金句：

My heart is quiet and the house is perfect:

Eastern yard giving me the mum

Southern heart presenting me the mountain

While, if the feeling is brilliantly charming with the last piece of her

somewhere birds back their satisfied home

The truth is real grace:

She who with a couples of drinks,
she who with clear mind without complains

（1）职老爷爷

职老同学企图在结构上有所创新和突破，并力求中国古代诗歌的意境，这个是楼下琵夫人翻译中所没有的

这个叫做：创新，是诗歌创作以及再创作以及文学和科研领域的兽药



(2)琵夫人

琵夫人的这个翻译英文非常流畅地道，完全摆脱是秦国历史的素服。

特别是第4句的CHASE非常用的好，pace也有意境，和CHASE对应的非常默契，不留笔痕

而且整体简明爽利，好！！！！

虽然仍有上升的空间，特别在中国股市的意境和朦胧方面，但已经南能可贵了，首先赞一个，也望同学们学习

Living a life in a busy place

Yet I have nothing to chase

The secret of such grace

Is because I have a quiet pace

 

As I enjoy my daisies under the eastern fence

Looking up far and the south mountain rushes into the scene

The air of the forest around the setting sun is so fresh

embraced the perishing birds returning to their nests

 

So much is beneath the surface

Simply speechless for such a showcase