五言 译贺兰兄大作 A River in Suzhou

爱为君所赠，玉钏枕边魂。
苏州兰溪水，曾照并肩人。
相思一何苦，桃腮欲滴露。
不舍是春风，拂晓穿门户。
似闻红缨马，拴向篱边树。

贺兰兄原玉：

I cherished the gift jewelry under my pillow,
Retrospecting the time on a river in Suzhou.
Missing is bittering, though, 
Trying to brew it into peaches dew,
In the thought of the offerer who would come 
With the spring winds that blew.