英譯納蘭容若之《夢江南.昏鴉盡》

Away flown all the crows, standing shortly,
How I longed for her, like snowflakes eagerly,
Writhe as catkins into the incense pavillion,
Where she used to stay with my companion.
Only the breeze still sways the plum in vase,
Gray is my heart burnt in the thurible of brass.

納蘭容若原作：
昏鴉盡，小立恨因誰？急雪乍翻香閣絮，輕風吹到膽瓶梅，心字已成灰。

諸位已經知道，俺素著名的英文二把刀，請豌博帶頭磚一下英文用字。有些字俺只是在看小說時見過，口語裡自己根本都木用過。哈哈