英譯白居易之《夢江南.江南好》

The charm in the south of the Yangtze River, 
Could always be seen with closing eyes.
While the red flowers burn in the sunrise,
Green water like bluegrass floats with Spring nearer.
By a warming cup of wine against cold,
The longing for the south grows that I can't hold.

白居易原作：
江南好，風景舊曾諳。日出江花紅勝火，春來江水綠如藍，能不憶江南。

俺介是英文二把刀哪，請豌博帶頭給磚一下用字。