諸詩友翻譯李商隱名作《登樂遊原》，排名不分先後：

中文原文：《登樂遊原》 唐 李商隱

向晚意不適，驅車登古原。
夕陽無限好，只是近黃昏。

唐 李商隱《登樂遊原》英譯 送交者: 豌博 2016年04月04日

"Hiking on Joy-Tour Terrain" 

Didn't feel well as the day drawing to a close,
away for hiking on the ancient terrain I drove. 
How marvelous the setting sun enchants on,
pitiful near the dusk and won't glow for long.

雪葵戲評：感覺不如拙譯傳神，馬涅？趕車算啥？哈哈哈

試譯 《登樂遊原》唐 李商隱  送交者: 文思 2016年04月03日

I feel unwell the evening somehow,
Going out and seeking for quiet scenery now.
The moment the twilight is lovely bright
Regretfully, the dark is soon in sight.

曹評：感覺最後兩句處理得好，切入角度，別有新意！

跟譯李商隱名作《登樂遊原》 送交者: 曹雪葵 2016年04月03日

Rein in the galloping horse who cares,
That I'm drunk? At me the sun stares,
Round and red, for help to save from falling.
With the old plane dyed as if it were morning. 

豌評：哈哈錯過曹兄這版狂傲放任。。

試譯李商隱《登樂遊原》 送交者: 邊砦 2016年04月03日

Without feeling comfortable at the end of the day,
I drive out to the historic site close to the imperial bay.
What a glorious sunset before my eye!
As long as the twilight were not to follow by.

曹評：大讚邊砦兄好譯！尾句處理得尤其好： 不說“已近黃昏”，卻說“不近黃昏”就好，轉折有致！