评诗：碗博翻译陆游《游山西村》大作精彩！赏析几句：
陆游原文：七律 《游山西村》
莫笑农家腊酒浑，丰年留客足鸡豚。
山重水复疑无路，柳暗花明又一村。
箫鼓追随春社近，衣冠俭朴古风存。
从今若许闲乘月，拄杖无时夜叩门。
碗博译作原玉："A Tour of Mountain West Village" by Southern Song Poet Lu You
Better not laugh about the rough winter spirits in a farm country,
guests treated in harvest year with bonanza of pork and poultry.
mountains and rivers run endless as paths are increasingly few,
a villa of shady willow grove and bright floral alleys jump in view.
Embraced by a music band as approaching commune of spring,
everyone seen sticks to the ancient norm and in plain dressing.
Should there be chance in the future for more leisure moon ride,
gonna drop in with my walking stick to knock on door any night.
还是先 walk through the sentences：
莫笑农家腊酒浑
Better not laugh about the rough winter spirits in a farm country,
--- 感觉rough用得好，粗制也，非精馏，体现村酿的“浑”。另外刚看到碗博跟帖讨论“腊酒”或译为winter wine 还有 winter rum 更妥，个见还是winter spirits贴切。原因：rum 太亲美，就是为了老美们看得懂。哈哈。但中国迄今不会酿rum。wine 太葡萄了，古代中国不会酿，所以葡萄酒成了稀罕物，多从西域弄来。所以古诗才有“葡萄美酒夜光杯”，葡萄酒成美酒了。“spirits”好在一是泛称，二是读着就像烧酒，中国古农村都是粮食酒，不烧也烧，三是spirits听着颇廉价，侧面地对应那个“浑”字。
丰年留客足鸡豚
guests treated in harvest year with bonanza of pork and poultry.
--- 超喜欢这个bonanza。因为米国有个牛仔电视连续剧叫这个名字。哈哈
山重水复疑无路
mountains and rivers run endless as paths are increasingly few,
--- increasingly 这个字不喜。越来越few，译为越来越“增加了”few，总觉得有点儿别扭，为啥不说越来越“少到”few涅？还是E文有这样的习惯？
山重水复疑无路，柳暗花明又一村。
a villa of shady willow grove and bright floral alleys jump in view.
“村”肯定是个village，但villa可以接受，也很美，意思不偏。jump in view 三字精彩，突然闪入眼帘，恰符陆游“柳暗花明又一村”的诗意，俺是想不出！
箫鼓追随春社近
Embraced by a music band as approaching commune of spring,
--- embraced 译“追随”，比follow更生动。值得一提的是：commune 这个字忒妙了，公社也，原始公社也，巴黎公社也，但极左可就成了communism，极右则成了capitalist社区。哈哈哈。其实，它恰是中国古代村镇里的“社”！无论拜祭祖先神灵、为顺应节气组织活动、大型集会、示威游行都在这儿聚首。最后总是场子里排桌摆酒，老人们坐大堂里面，放不下的人通通外面，热闹一番才罢，估计陆游没少经历“家家扶得醉人归”这种场面。其实国外村镇也有类似场所，西部牛仔地区，这个场所多为小镇教堂前面的courtyard，有事儿要组织活动都是那儿，最后大家一起喝酒跳方舞进入高潮。
衣冠俭朴古风存。
everyone seen sticks to the ancient norm and in plain dressing.
--- 好！stick to the ancient norm
从今若许闲乘月
Should there be chance in the future for more leisure moon ride,
--- moon ride 应该是个固定词组，“乘（借）着月光出游”是也。不知俺理解当否？
拄杖无时夜叩门
gonna drop in with my walking stick to knock on door any night.
--- 用字精确。
全篇流畅无滞，每行字数大致相同，用 aabbccdd 布局押谐韵，吟诵起来旋律感很强。而用字考究精确则是碗博一贯的风格。大赞！
