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午夜魂断梦如烟
送交者: 爪四哥 2020年05月18日08:57:49 于 [诗词歌赋] 发送悄悄话

昨天被欲哥深情演绎的吉他弹唱野菊花共震了一下(WFH和 WOS的天壤之别 ),心弦的颤音还未平息下来,今天又被链子与才哥的“need you now”欲哥, 你点的 Need You Now )再次共振。乖乖不得鸟,再这么共震下去,俺这颗老心脏要碎碎平安了。

昨天为欲哥的野菊花题了一首押哀韵的七言何日君再来,今天接着为Antebellum的这首脍炙人口传唱全球的名曲need you now 题一首七言绝句。为了应时应景,继续押哀韵:

魂断午夜

午夜魂销不知处

泪花如雨逆风来

一杯冷酒温残梦

昨日玫瑰可再开



Need You Now 原韵:

Picture perfect memories
Scattered all around the floor
Reaching for the phone 'cause, I can't fight it anymore
And I wonder if I ever cross your mind
For me it happens all the time
It's a quarter after one, I'm all alone and I need you now
Said I wouldn't call but I lost all control and I need you now
And I don't know how I can do without, I just need you now

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Another shot of whiskey, can't stop looking at the door
Wishing you'd come sweepin' in the way you did before
And I wonder if I ever cross your mind
For me it happens all the time
It's a quarter after one, I'm a little drunk, and I need you now
Said I wouldn't call but I lost all control and I need you now
And I don't know how I can do without, I just need you now

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Whoa oh whoa
Guess I'd rather hurt than feel nothing at all
It's a quarter after one, I'm all alone and I need you now
And I said I wouldn't call but I'm a little drunk and I need you now
And I don't know how I can do without, I just need you now
I just need you now
Oh baby I need you now ooh ooh

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干脆一不做二不羞,再来一首演绎版:

午夜芸花

夜半鸦啼不知处

昙花悄怆对愁开

一杯冷酒温残梦

昨日佳人可再来

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