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| 送交者: Midway 2007年08月21日00:00:00 于 [诗词歌赋] 发送悄悄话 |
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Not bad, not bad at all. If you can formulate it according to tone-fixations, it would SOUND (literately) much better. I read it, I got the real feeling. Thank you. |
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