铁爪扣苍岩，孤高近日边。

俊肩立寰宇，疾目瞰绝巅。

猎猎翻翮羽，粼粼动碧澜。

惊雷难掩耳，流矢破长天。

又改了一下，大家看哪个好

铜钩扣铁岩，孤绝日轮边。

莽莽琉璃碧，粼粼锦浪蓝。

苍姿立寰宇，疾目窥崖巅。

霹雳难凝目，流星落九天。

要不是版权问题，真想用青鞋儿的“伺”字来替换我的“瞰”和“窥”字啊。

鹰文不好，只能大致意义一下，英文诗的韵律还是体会不出来。

感觉上下两段一静一动，倒更像一副对联。

The Eagle
By Alfred, Lord Tennyson 1809–1892

He clasps the crag with crooked hands;
Close to the sun in lonely lands,
Ring'd with the azure world, he stands.

The wrinkled sea beneath him crawls;
He watches from his mountain walls,
And like a thunderbolt he falls.