白芮译红豆的"无题":
绝望
无执迷
绝望 欲牵连
绝望 欲轻浅
绝望 欲无性
一个意念
无灵魂
意念 为平静
意念 为舒适
意念 为非美
一种气味
无接触
气味 为新鲜
气味 为年轻
气味 为象光一样从容
气味 为甜美的安宁
或安宁的甜美
无执迷
无灵魂
无触摸
绝望
意念
气味
。。。
红豆的"无题":
Desperation
No obsession
Desperate to be relevant
Desperate to be light
Desperate for non-sex
A mind
No soul
A mind for peace
A mind for comfort
A mind for non-beauty
A smell
No touch
A smell for being fresh
A smell for being young
A smell for being easy as a light
A smell for being sweetly quiet
Or quietly sweet
No obsession
No soul
No touch
Desperation
A mind
A smell
……
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白芮译贝钢的"二胡":
执迷
无绝望
执迷于无关
执迷于深沉
痴迷于性
一个灵魂
无意念
灵魂为风暴
灵魂为烦乱
灵魂为美
一个触摸
无气味
触摸为熟悉
触摸为经历
触摸为成为岩石一样坚硬
触摸为悲恸的放声
或放声的悲恸
无绝望
无意念
无气味
执迷
灵魂
触摸
。。。
贝钢的"二胡":
Obsession
No desperation
Obsessed to be irrelevant
Obsessed to be heavy
Obsessed for sex
A soul
No mind
A soul for storm
A soul for discomfort
A soul for beauty
A touch
No smell
A touch for being familiar
A touch for being experienced
A touch for being as hard as a rock
A touch for being bitterly loud
or loudly bitter
No desperation
No mind
No smell
Obsession
A soul
A touch
……