兩年前，電影Interstellar（中譯：星際穿越）在中國首映。因片中引用“Do Not Go Gentle into That Good Night”一詩，激起國人對作者威爾斯詩人Dylan Thomas的關注。一時間，網上出現了七個中譯版本。某於一爬梯上應朋友之邀評判，閱畢，竟無一滿意。遂坦言相告。片刻肅靜後，有好事者懇請修米。某雖從不相信詩歌適合翻譯，盛情難卻，未能免俗。下面就是某在爬梯終結前交的作業。以博一粲。

夜幕

不要謙卑地消逝於夜幕
燃燒吧！咆哮吧！垂老者，在黯淡的黃昏
怒吼，為白晝行將終結，衝冠一怒

智者，風燭殘年，知盛衰生死不可抗拒
只因壯志未酬，他們，
不甘謙卑地消逝於夜幕

良善者，目睹波濤過後的寧靜，驚呼
若無驚濤駭浪，庸碌的一生或許絢麗，他們，
怒吼，為白晝行將終結，衝冠一怒

曾因留戀於麗日的裙角縱情歌舞，
蹉跎歲月而愴然悔恨的人們，他們
不願謙卑地消逝於夜幕

堅忍的律己者，雖行將就木，
失明的雙目，仍有歡愉，仍有流星般耀眼的火花，他們
怒吼，為白晝行將終結，衝冠一怒

兒，祈求上蒼，願您，親愛的父親，在遠山幽谷，
飽含激情熱淚，詛咒，為兒祝福
不要謙卑地消逝於夜幕。願吾父
怒吼，為白晝行將終結，衝冠一怒！

原文：

Do not go gentle into that good night.
Old age should burn and rave at close of day;
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

Though wise men at their end know dark is right,
Because their words had forked no lightning they
Do not go gentle into that good night.

Good men, the last wave by, crying how bright
Their frail deeds might have danced in a green bay,
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

Wild men who caught and sang the sun in flight
And learn, too late, they grieved it on its way
Do not go gentle into that good night.

Grave men, near death, who see with blinding sight
Blind eyes could blaze like meteors and be gay
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

And you, my father, there on the sad height,
Curse, bless me now with your fierce tears, I pray.
Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

其它中譯版本：http://language.chinadaily.com.cn/trans/2014-11/27/content_18981597.htm