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日行一善,替路过同学批改“鹰熊恋(rondeau)”
送交者: 直言 2010年12月05日20:52:24 于 [教育学术] 发送悄悄话

Beside a rock

Beside a rock in wintry air
Retreats a sleepy and blind bear
Snow covers him from toes to nose
Will he, after this freezing cold
Again find and sniff the same manure?

Why does the bear with hoary hair
Find refugee here, not in his lair?
Why does this grovelling bear doze
Beside a rock?

A birdcall sends a smile so rare
Across his face not really fair
His dangling tongue now quickly grows
Around which profusely fluid flows
With what he drools for an affair?
Beside a rock

内含至少一处错误,欢迎有兴趣的同学不吝指正。嘿嘿。

路过这儿原诗:

Beside that rock

Beside that rock in salty air
Retreats a tired and sleepy bear
High waves now start to pound his toes
Long willow leaves then poke his nose
And flounders jump out everywhere

Why does the bear with hoary hair
Relax in here, not in his lair?
Why does this weary bear not doze
Beside that rock?

A birdcall sends a smile so rare
Across his face not really fair
His dangling tongue now quickly grows
From which profusely fluid flows 6
Where does he drool for an affair?
beside that rock

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