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送交者: 直言 2010年12月05日20:52:24 於 [教育學術] 發送悄悄話

Beside a rock

Beside a rock in wintry air
Retreats a sleepy and blind bear
Snow covers him from toes to nose
Will he, after this freezing cold
Again find and sniff the same manure?

Why does the bear with hoary hair
Find refugee here, not in his lair?
Why does this grovelling bear doze
Beside a rock?

A birdcall sends a smile so rare
Across his face not really fair
His dangling tongue now quickly grows
Around which profusely fluid flows
With what he drools for an affair?
Beside a rock

內含至少一處錯誤,歡迎有興趣的同學不吝指正。嘿嘿。

路過這兒原詩:

Beside that rock

Beside that rock in salty air
Retreats a tired and sleepy bear
High waves now start to pound his toes
Long willow leaves then poke his nose
And flounders jump out everywhere

Why does the bear with hoary hair
Relax in here, not in his lair?
Why does this weary bear not doze
Beside that rock?

A birdcall sends a smile so rare
Across his face not really fair
His dangling tongue now quickly grows
From which profusely fluid flows 6
Where does he drool for an affair?
beside that rock

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