行百里者半九十。

张璐：Half of the people who have embarked on a one hundred mile journey may fall by the way side.

评：理解有误，又失简明。

 a8:    The last mile is the hardest.  

评：以少胜多。

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华山再高，顶有过路。

张璐：No matter how high the mountain is,one can always ascend to its top.

评：意明。

 a8:     A mountain however high has a pass to be topped.

评：简而有致。

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兄弟虽有小忿，不废懿亲。

张璐：Differences between brothers can not sever their bloodties.

评：信而达。

a8:      Brothers at odds are still brothers.

评：简即是美。

后记：比较鉴别而已，非一比高低；一个是临场发挥， 一个是斟酌之作，不可相提并论也。