評詩： 職老《沁園春.雪》譯作精彩，賞析幾句：

i am living in the north
thousand miles of ice
teen times more  of snow
--- 用筆坦然，不失毛太祖的開闊。teen 疑為ten

look at Great Wall
from inside to outside
--- 望長城內外，惟余莽莽，大河上下，頓失滔滔。譯文似有丟句，然細思，不言大河，意似已足。端看譯筆功力了。

mountains are white like a silver snake
rivers are frozen like wax-like elephant
--- 原來“大河上下，頓失滔滔”放這兒了，rivers are frozen。但河凍住了很難像大象，黃河結凍的情形俺見過，冰擠起來，佶屈聱牙的，倒像地震後鋼筋水泥。

how can I stand there so close to the haven?
--- 好！“試比高”之意正是如此。haven 疑為 heaven

wait till a clear sky and everything is so beautiful like a girl
--- 這句出彩兒！“看紅妝素裹，分外妖嬈”，若逐字直譯，會多麻煩！一句 is so beautiful like a girl ，既準確又美不勝收！

how wonderful if I can get the power
who care other people?
--- 這句譯文用了引申義：無數英雄對誰折腰涅？對“江山”，愛這江山就要奪她到手，要奪就得有power。

even a hero like Horbbit who just can shoot a eagle
--- 哈哈，風趣從這句開始
 
or  Harry potter a teenage magician who could not write a poem
--- 好！

how about WG Bush? I guess just so so
--- 哈哈，just so so。好！

if you count a wind-flow person
please look at website of  Creaders
--- 最後這一行畫龍點睛！

全篇用筆不加思索，流暢自然，一氣呵成！再贊。掛上去大家欣賞！