感謝正明兄貼來一首勞倫斯的“詠月詩”，英文原文和正明兄的譯作都很精彩！而且這首詩還非常應景，因為明天就是中秋節了。俺也乘興跟着正明兄譯一回，俺英文二把刀水平大家都知道，就是起鬨給大家湊個趣而已。


英文原文：Aware （by D.H. Lawrence）
 
Slowly the moon is rising out of the ruddy haze,
Divesting herself of her golden shift, and so
Emerging white and exquisite; and I in amaze
See in the sky before me, a woman I did not know
I loved, but there she goes and her beauty hurts my heart;
I follow her down the night, begging her not to depart.


譯文：《虞美人.賞月》 （by 曹雪葵）

初垂碧宇光流注，玉縷穿紅霧。
悄寬金襖照香肩，驀矚不識天上現嬋娟。

故傷愛慕情何已，漸隱雲中去。
心逐倩影度深宵，不舍臨行牽袂懇休遙。