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申時行: Sonnet XI (定稿)
送交者: 萬尊 2008年07月14日03:07:06 於 [詩詞歌賦] 發送悄悄話
I know you are not programm'd to miss me, But I still consider you a God's treat. Part of your memories shall remain sweet, As I enjoy poem, coffee, and tea. So why did you take all I have for life, Away from where it was really needed. Plus what I most beloved and pleaded, Aided by some one your poisoned knife. Serpents did much better than you and he, The crime against me dries ocean and sea. But when ever I am in dream and sleep, You come to visit and drive me to weep. Thus ordained by fate I accept it. Thus done by you and him I reject it.
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  還可以對調Plus句和上一句,也通. - 萬尊 07/14/08 (164)
    沙擅編戲,登高而跳,是很有戲看的!  /無內容 - 萬尊 07/14/08 (181)
    ABBA CDDC EEFF GG - 萬尊 07/14/08 (199)
  You need a subject - achc 07/14/08 (257)
    您能不能也寫首十四行? 謝謝.  /無內容 - 農村文人 07/17/08 (142)
    這幾句好象有語法問題。不過我英語比較差。  /無內容 - 農村文人 07/15/08 (157)
    Plus 兩句與上兩句合一就可以通.Thus兩句 - 萬尊 07/14/08 (226)
      They would make sense either. - achc 07/14/08 (197)
        詩話本是碎話,何況此話不碎! ... Plus句 - 萬尊 07/14/08 (173)
          Trying to get off the hook? - achc 07/14/08 (211)
            your english is good  /無內容 - 農村文人 07/16/08 (163)
            Two sentences are compressed in one line: - 萬尊 07/15/08 (181)
            If you can't take the twist, try - - 萬尊 07/15/08 (168)
        Oops. They wouldn't make sense either.  /無內容 - achc 07/14/08 (155)
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