评诗： 职老《沁园春.雪》译作精彩，赏析几句：

i am living in the north
thousand miles of ice
teen times more  of snow
--- 用笔坦然，不失毛太祖的开阔。teen 疑为ten

look at Great Wall
from inside to outside
--- 望长城内外，惟余莽莽，大河上下，顿失滔滔。译文似有丢句，然细思，不言大河，意似已足。端看译笔功力了。

mountains are white like a silver snake
rivers are frozen like wax-like elephant
--- 原来“大河上下，顿失滔滔”放这儿了，rivers are frozen。但河冻住了很难像大象，黄河结冻的情形俺见过，冰挤起来，佶屈聱牙的，倒像地震后钢筋水泥。

how can I stand there so close to the haven?
--- 好！“试比高”之意正是如此。haven 疑为 heaven

wait till a clear sky and everything is so beautiful like a girl
--- 这句出彩儿！“看红妆素裹，分外妖娆”，若逐字直译，会多麻烦！一句 is so beautiful like a girl ，既准确又美不胜收！

how wonderful if I can get the power
who care other people?
--- 这句译文用了引申义：无数英雄对谁折腰涅？对“江山”，爱这江山就要夺她到手，要夺就得有power。

even a hero like Horbbit who just can shoot a eagle
--- 哈哈，风趣从这句开始
 
or  Harry potter a teenage magician who could not write a poem
--- 好！

how about WG Bush? I guess just so so
--- 哈哈，just so so。好！

if you count a wind-flow person
please look at website of  Creaders
--- 最后这一行画龙点睛！

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