曹兄天净沙 译绿岛兄 melting heart 大作 再倒译成英文

I cherished the gift jewelry under my pillow,

Retrospecting the time on a river in Suzhou.

Missing is bittering, though, 

Trying to brew it into peaches dew,

In the thought of the offerer who would come 

With the spring winds that blew. 

曹兄原玉：

谁赠藏枕宝珠？
梦中帆影姑苏，
思到深时莫苦，
融成桃露，
春风人在归途。

绿岛兄原玉：
The jewelry is still under the pillow while sleeping
I wonder that was only my dreaming?
It was so sweet that my heart is still melting:
As beautiful as the rear orchid blooming
Love was like the storm coming so sudden
but like the peach flower rain in a fairy garden