诸诗友译拙作之《荷塘》集锦，排名不分前后。

原文：荷塘（曹雪葵）
万绿争湖拥一粉，蝉嘶乱耳暂歇筝。
鸦平鸭仄风不管，闲荡垂条飞半空。

试译曹兄诗（贺兰山）

The Lotus Pond
I focuse in the lake on a leaves overlaid pretty pink fay,
Being disturbed by Screaming cicadas and stop  my harp's play.
The wind cares nothing about the poetry cadence of scholars’ rhythm,
Blowing the willow twigs swinging in the sky to spend its leasure time.

和叉鱼哥英译曹雪葵七绝《荷塘》（碗博）

喜读曹兄的悠境美诗，并欣赏叉鱼哥的天花妙缀译作，不禁闻鸡起舞，从不同角度和补一版新译，欢迎叉鱼哥和大家进一步润色。

Lotus Pond
A vast view of greens overlaying the lake ornamented with a pink beauty,
screaming cicadas have screwed hearing and paused the harp's melody.
For the monotone of a crow or prosody of ducks why shall the wind care,
while hanging willow strands are swinging in leisure and aimless in the air.

试译斑竹的《荷塘》（叉鱼哥）

Lotus Pond
The full green packs the lake alondside an eye-catching spot of glow,
The cicada's whistle puts an abrupt stop to the harp's music flow;
Wind and duck seem not to bother, neither the crow,
Only the silent willow weaves a changing window to this serene view.