曹兄天淨沙 譯綠島兄 melting heart 大作 再倒譯成英文

I cherished the gift jewelry under my pillow,

Retrospecting the time on a river in Suzhou.

Missing is bittering, though, 

Trying to brew it into peaches dew,

In the thought of the offerer who would come 

With the spring winds that blew. 

曹兄原玉：

誰贈藏枕寶珠？
夢中帆影姑蘇，
思到深時莫苦，
融成桃露，
春風人在歸途。

綠島兄原玉：
The jewelry is still under the pillow while sleeping
I wonder that was only my dreaming?
It was so sweet that my heart is still melting:
As beautiful as the rear orchid blooming
Love was like the storm coming so sudden
but like the peach flower rain in a fairy garden