接力翻譯《丁香仙子》

【七絕 心有千千結的丁香仙子】  
原作：曹雪葵

含香共守志丁丁，白玉雕成侯乙鍾。
人世枉編千萬調，奏出風雨始關情。

英譯： 聊齋常客
Sticking in one string the bouquet fragrannce is holding,
Lilacs are blooming like snow-white jade bells hanging.

Thousands of tunes were written for them to ring,
Only the wind's and rain's shaking then they can sing.

附：
諸詩友接力玩譯《丁香仙子》，發起人：綠島陽光

英譯：綠島陽光


Embracing the elegant scent they are patiently waiting,
the snow-white buds look like pure jade chimes hanging.
Although countless music has been written down for everything,
Only with the accompanying of wind and rain chord they could pop love

everlasting.

再中譯自己的英譯： 綠島陽光


懷揣着香味靜靜期待着被欣賞，
潔白無瑕的花蕾猶如純玉編鐘。
雖然世間人們編奏有千曲百樂，
唯伴風雨和弦方可奏出情愛濃。

繼續接力:玩譯《七絕 詠白色丁香花》 送交者: 叉魚哥  


再英譯： 叉魚哥
Its fragrance silently permeates,
Looking for the appreciation reciprocal;
Its flowers blossom into chains of jade bells,
With a much whiter shade of crystal;
Men and women've woven their worldly feelings,
Into millions of inter-knotted heart-warming songs;
Only the true love, as seasoned in the rains and winds as the lilac's,
Will in the end resonate in the sunny symphonic dongs.

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