諸詩友譯拙作之《荷塘》集錦，排名不分前後。

原文：荷塘（曹雪葵）
萬綠爭湖擁一粉，蟬嘶亂耳暫歇箏。
鴉平鴨仄風不管，閒蕩垂條飛半空。

試譯曹兄詩（賀蘭山）

The Lotus Pond
I focuse in the lake on a leaves overlaid pretty pink fay,
Being disturbed by Screaming cicadas and stop  my harp's play.
The wind cares nothing about the poetry cadence of scholars’ rhythm,
Blowing the willow twigs swinging in the sky to spend its leasure time.

和叉魚哥英譯曹雪葵七絕《荷塘》（碗博）

喜讀曹兄的悠境美詩，並欣賞叉魚哥的天花妙綴譯作，不禁聞雞起舞，從不同角度和補一版新譯，歡迎叉魚哥和大家進一步潤色。

Lotus Pond
A vast view of greens overlaying the lake ornamented with a pink beauty,
screaming cicadas have screwed hearing and paused the harp's melody.
For the monotone of a crow or prosody of ducks why shall the wind care,
while hanging willow strands are swinging in leisure and aimless in the air.

試譯斑竹的《荷塘》（叉魚哥）

Lotus Pond
The full green packs the lake alondside an eye-catching spot of glow,
The cicada's whistle puts an abrupt stop to the harp's music flow;
Wind and duck seem not to bother, neither the crow,
Only the silent willow weaves a changing window to this serene view.