回復: 翁姐寫給楊爺的英文信(附中譯文) 作者： zt10

Cold here, icy cold there. You belong to neither, leaves have withered. Your face is pale and blue, a tearful smile. Something in your eyes, whispers words of last good-bye. My heart sinks down, tears surge out.

中譯1:此處冷，彼處更冷。枯葉凋零，君屬何人。君面慘澹憂鬱，含淚而笑。君熱淚盈 眶，喃喃自語，難言再見。妾心沉落，淚涌似濤。 　　中譯2:(原文不錯，但譯文太酸了。試重譯如下，見笑)

俺這裡感冒了，冰冷的感冒。你似乎不屬於什麼，像個凋零的枯葉。你的臉慘白而泛藍，想微笑卻滾出幾滴眼淚。眼睛進砂子了？俺悄悄說拜拜，俺的心放下了，眼淚倒冒出來了。　　Hot summer. Cheerful Cocktail. You took my hand. We fled into another world of band. You sat by my side, long hair tied behind, cool and killing. Smile floating on the lemonade, soft and smooth. How I was ?amazed. Your face looked like the cover of the magazine. My head spin. You led my hand, danced along the crazy theme. 中譯1:酷夏。仍憶雞尾酒會。君執妾手，共享二人世界。君坐妾之側，長發束於腦後，英姿勃發。笑容蕩漾。妾訝君面尤類雜誌封面。旋轉，君執妾手，瘋狂舞曲。 中譯2:　　今年夏天挺熱。連公雞都搖着尾巴狂歡。你偷偷抓住俺的手，我們共赴黃泉。你緊擠着俺落座，把俺的頭髮綁在後面，既冷且酷地好像要殺俺，逗得俺笑起來像檸檬汁一樣酸，弄得你那兒是既松且疲軟。使俺驚訝無算，你的臉就像載有土豆廣告的雜誌封面。為了維持平衡同時隨着舞曲瘋狂旋轉，你必須拉着俺，弄得俺頭暈目眩。　　Light vied with wine, elegance mixed with fragrance, laughing covered by greetings, the crowed was busy at handshaking. You stood there, eyes on me. I trembled at the sparkles, brighter than the light. A masterpiece from God, I felt dizzy. We were not near, yet we were together.

中譯1:燈酒相輝，芳雅相應，祝辭笑聲此起彼伏，芸芸皆勞碌於握手。君站立一旁，美目探妾。妾瑩燈下顫顫而立。此必上帝之傑作，使 暈眩。雖妾與君相隔甚遠,然心相近。

中譯2:　酒暗燈昏，就等登記結婚，過日子一定噴香、溫馨，俺偷笑而別人來奉承。周圍的人只會忙着拉拉手，你卻直勾勾地盯着俺，倆眼珠子比拉燈還明。上帝之手摸得俺要發昏。俺與你年齡差很遠，並不影響咱們往一起滾。　　 Days ended. You said, you would wait for me at the Alps side. We would ski against snowflakes dancing in the sky. I gave no answer but a good-bye to accompany your flight. Gone was the plane, I suddenly tasted my pain. I knew I had been silly and stupid, you were in my heart, I shouldn’t have hidden in the dark. I tried to forget your disappointment. I made believe sometime someday, I would tell you, I feel all the same.

中譯1:往日已去。君雲君將於阿爾卑斯山畔待妾，滑雪於雪花飛舞之天空下。妾欲說還休，但囑祝福。飛機漸逝，妾心將苦。妾深知妾之愚蠹，君已竊妾心，妾當不可漠然於暗中彷徨。妾嘗試忘君之失，然無可善終。妾信某日某時，妾將告君妾心永駐

中譯2:　　 好景不長在。你許願要帶俺去什麼愛爾必死山，我們一起滑雪，雪片飄滿天。俺不懂如何作答，只好先說再見。飛機一去，俺頓感心寒。或許俺是有點愚頑，但對你就是很喜歡，俺定要把心裡的話對你明言。俺總想忘掉你的失信，不過按會對你老調重彈，總有那麼一天。

My thought struggled at confessing, somehow hesitation ended in flinching. I continued my role of a fool, clinched to my maiden pride, yet secretly indulged in your promise of the white land -- snow measuring down to us, in your arms I am lifted up. The chiming of Christmas bell! 中譯1:妾於懺悔中掙扎，不時退縮，猶豫。妾愚於處子之婚，然潛縱於君之諾。白雪皚 皚，君挽妾身，妾意甚歡，共聽聖誕鐘聲。中譯2:為了追你，俺心似油煎。欲言又止，萎縮不前。俺只好繼續冒充傻瓜的角色，向你表白你是俺的初戀。終於騙取了你私下的諾言。只要在你的懷抱里俺不怕下雪，喪鐘聲中，咱們相會在聖誕。

The bell died in the patter of rain, from hell came the laughing of Satan at my brain. Tearful smile, swallowed by the darkness. How could I trace your hair to wipe your tears? My hands reached out, catching nothing but a raindrop, on a leaf that had withered.

中譯1:鐘聲忽止於急雨，乃聽撒旦之笑聲。含淚微笑，黑暗相伴。妾欲尋君之發擦君之淚而不可。妾伸手欲觸，無他，但枯葉一雨滴耳。

中譯2:怎麼一下雨那鍾就停，俺心中響徹撒旦他老人家那爽朗的笑聲。俺一邊笑一邊擠眼淚，與你在一起哪怕是在黑暗中。俺想摸你毛髮卻假裝要為你抹眼淚，伸手摸去感覺和摸雨中的枯枝敗葉一般同。

Snowflakes have melted into water, we are no more together. 中譯1:雪花漸融，妾與君天涯一方。

中譯2:　當今冬冰消雪融，你我不妨古德拜，各奔西東。　　posted by 翁帆 @ 2004-08-13 21:28