在五味看了多篇翻译集锦, 还觉得是原版翻译最好, 淡薄天涯的次之.

原版翻译象冰封下的激流, 淡薄天涯的翻译象迸发的岩浆. 两者皆动人心弦, 但原版翻译更神似英文原作.

我斗胆试着把两个版本都修改了一下, 可能要被两个版本的粉丝一起臭骂了.

世界上最远的距离The most distant way in the world
原版修改稿

世界上最远的距离 The most distant way in the world
不是生死的隔离 is not the way from birth to the end.
而是我坐在你身边 It is when I sit near you
你却不知道我爱你 that you don't understand I love you.

世界上最远的距离 The most distant way in the world
不是你不知道我爱你is not that you're not sure I love you.
而是我爱到痴迷It is when my love is bewildering the soul
却不能告诉你but I can't speak it out

世界上最远的距离 The most distant way in the world
不是我不能说爱你 is not that I can't say I love you.
而是我思量千遍It is after looking into my heart
却仍然无法不爱你I can't change my love.

世界上最远的距离 The most distant way in the world
不是无法不爱你 is not that I'm loving you.
而是我们彼此相爱 It is in our love
却不能够在一起 we are keeping between the distance.

世界上最远的距离 The most distant way in the world
不是不能在一起is not the distance across us.
而是我们披荆斩棘It is when we're breaking through the way
却不能承认彼此的爱意we deny the existance of love.

世界上最远的距离 So the most distant way in the world
不是树与树的对立 is not in two distant trees.
而是同根生长的树枝 It is the same rooted branches
却无法在风中相依 can't enjoy the co-existance.

世界上最远的距离 So the most distant way in the world
不是树枝无法相依 is not in the being sepearated branches.
而是相互照耀的星星 It is in the blinking stars
却没有交汇的轨迹 they can't burn the light.

世界上最远的距离 So the most distant way in the world
不是无法交汇的星际 is not the burning stars.
而是交汇的星火It is after the light
却在转瞬间无处寻觅 they can't be seen from afar.

世界上最远的距离 So the most distant way in the world
不是星火转瞬无处寻觅is not the light that is fading away.
而是相遇的我们 It is the coincidence of us
却注定无缘相系 is not supposed for the love.

哦, 世界上最远的距离 So the most distant way in the world
是相爱的鸟和鱼is the love between the fish and bird.
一个飞翔在天 One is flying at the sky,
一个却深潜海底 the other is looking upon into the sea.

问世间何路最漫长? The most distant way in the world

淡薄天涯版修改稿

问世间何路最漫长? The most distant way in the world
不是生死两茫茫 is not the way from birth to the end.
而是咫尺天涯 It is when I sit near you
我的爱无法融入你的心房 that you don't understand I love you.

问世间何路最漫长 The most distant way in the world
不是你不明了我的渴望 is not that you're not sure I love you.
而是爱你到魂迷神散 It is when my love is bewildering the soul
却不知如何向你表白衷肠 but I can't speak it out

问世间何路最漫长 The most distant way in the world
不是情意绵绵口难张 is not that I can't say I love you.
而是我心底缠绵的爱 It is after looking into my heart
愿与你到地老天荒I can't change my love.

问世间何路最漫长The most distant way in the world
不是我对你情深意长 is not that I'm loving you.
而是你我虽相爱 It is in our love
心灵却天各一方 we are keeping between the distance.

问世间何路最漫长The most distant way in the world
不是时空让我们泪眼相望 is not the distance across us.
而是当我们冲破世俗的阻挡 It is when we're breaking through the way
却不敢承认深爱对方 we deny the existance of love.

问世间何路最漫长 So the most distant way in the world
不是两棵孤树只能隔山对望 is not in two distant trees.
而是同源同根的树枝 It is the same rooted branches
却不能相依相偎, 叶茂花香 can't enjoy the co-existance.

问世间何路最漫长 So the most distant way in the world
不是树枝朝着不同的方向is not in the being sepearated branches.
而是闪烁的星星 It is in the blinking stars
难以擦出耀眼的光芒 they can't burn the light.

问世间何路最漫长 So the most distant way in the world
不是流星不够耀眼光亮 is not the burning stars.
而是一逝既过 It is after the light
留下的是一片黑夜茫茫 they can't be seen from afar.

问世间何路最漫长 So the most distant way in the world
不是那瞬间即逝的光芒 is not the light that is fading away.
而是我们虽同生在世 It is the coincidence of us
情缘却不在此生上 is not supposed for the love.

问世间何路最漫长? So the most distant way in the world
是飞鸟和鱼儿爱到断肠is the love between the fish and bird.
一个展翅在蓝天 One is flying at the sky,
一个却深潜入海洋 the other is looking upon into the sea.

附（对比泰戈尔诗正宗原版翻译）

原版
世界上最远的距离 The most distant way in the world
不是生死的隔离 is not the way from birth to the end.
而是我站在你面前 It is when I sit near you
你不知道我爱你 that you don't understand I love you.

修改稿
世界上最远的距离 The most distant way in the world
不是生与死的交替 is not the way from birth to the end.
而是我坐在你身边 It is when I sit near you
你却不知道我爱你 that you don't understand I love you.

原版
世界上最远的距离 The most distant way in the world
不是我站在你面前 is not that you're not sure I love you.
你不知道我爱你 It is when my love is bewildering the soul
而是爱到痴迷 but I can't speak it out
却不能说我爱你

修改稿
世界上最远的距离 The most distant way in the world
不是你不知道我爱你is not that you're not sure I love you.
而是我爱到痴迷It is when my love is bewildering the soul
却不能告诉你but I can't speak it out

原版
世界上最远的距离 The most distant way in the world
不是我不能说我爱你 is not that I can't say I love you.
而是想你痛彻心脾 It is after looking into my heart
却只能深埋心底 I can't change my love.

修改稿
世界上最远的距离 The most distant way in the world
不是我不能说爱你 is not that I can't say I love you.
而是我思量千遍It is after looking into my heart
却仍然无法不爱你I can't change my love.

原版
世界上最远的距离 The most distant way in the world
不是我不能说我想你 is not that I'm loving you.
而是彼此相爱 It is in our love
却不能够在一起 we are keeping between the distance.

修改稿
世界上最远的距离 The most distant way in the world
不是无法不爱你 is not that I'm loving you.
而是我们彼此相爱 It is in our love
却不能够在一起 we are keeping between the distance.

原版
世界上最远的距离 The most distant way in the world
不是彼此相爱 is not the distance across us.
却不能够在一起 It is when we're breaking through the way
而是明知道真爱无敌 we deny the existance of love.
却装作毫不在意

修改稿
世界上最远的距离 The most distant way in the world
不是不能在一起is not the distance across us.
而是我们披荆斩棘It is when we're breaking through the way
却不能承认彼此的爱意we deny the existance of love.

原版
世界上最远的距离 So the most distant way in the world
不是树与树的距离 is not in two distant trees.
而是同根生长的树枝 It is the same rooted branches
却无法在风中相依 can't enjoy the co-existance.

修改稿
世界上最远的距离 So the most distant way in the world
不是树与树的对立 is not in two distant trees.
而是同根生长的树枝 It is the same rooted branches
却无法在风中相依 can't enjoy the co-existance.

原版
世界上最远的距离 So the most distant way in the world
不是树枝无法相依 is not in the being sepearated branches.
而是相互了望的星星 It is in the blinking stars
却没有交汇的轨迹 they can't burn the light.

修改稿
世界上最远的距离 So the most distant way in the world
不是树枝无法相依 is not in the being sepearated branches.
而是相互照耀的星星 It is in the blinking stars
却没有交汇的轨迹 they can't burn the light.

原版
世界上最远的距离 So the most distant way in the world
不是星星之间的轨迹 is not the burning stars.
而是纵然轨迹交汇 It is after the light
却在转瞬间无处寻觅 they can't be seen from afar.

修改稿
世界上最远的距离 So the most distant way in the world
不是无法交汇的星际 is not the burning stars.
而是交汇的星火It is after the light
却在转瞬间无处寻觅 they can't be seen from afar.

原版
世界上最远的距离 So the most distant way in the world
不是瞬间便无处寻觅 is not the light that is fading away.
而是尚未相遇 It is the coincidence of us
便注定无法相聚 is not supposed for the love.

修改稿
世界上最远的距离 So the most distant way in the world
不是星火无处寻觅is not the light that is fading away.
而是相遇的我们 It is the coincidence of us
却注定无缘相系 is not supposed for the love.

原版
世界上最远的距离 So the most distant way in the world
是鱼与飞鸟的距离 is the love between the fish and bird.
一个在天 One is flying at the sky,
一个却深潜海底 the other is looking upon into the sea.

修改稿
哦, 世界上最远的距离 So the most distant way in the world
是相爱的鸟和鱼is the love between the fish and bird.
一个飞翔在天 One is flying at the sky,
一个却深潜海底 the other is looking upon into the sea.

附（对比泰戈尔诗淡薄天涯版翻译）

淡薄天涯版
问世间何物把我们彼此推向远方?

修改稿
问世间何路最漫长?

淡薄天涯版
问世间何物把我们彼此推向远方? The most distant way in the world
不是生死两茫茫 is not the way from birth to the end.
而是咫尺天涯 It is when I sit near you
我的爱无法融入你的心房 that you don't understand I love you.

修改稿
问世间何路最漫长? The most distant way in the world
不是生死两茫茫 is not the way from birth to the end.
而是咫尺天涯 It is when I sit near you
我的爱无法融入你的心房 that you don't understand I love you

淡薄天涯版
问世间何物把我们彼此推向远方 The most distant way in the world
不是你不明了我心中的渴望 is not that you're not sure I love you.
而是爱你到魂迷神散 It is when my love is bewildering the soul
却不知如何向你表白我的衷肠 but I can't speak it out

修改稿
问世间何路最漫长 The most distant way in the world
不是你不明了我的渴望 is not that you're not sure I love you.
而是爱你到魂迷神散 It is when my love is bewildering the soul
却不知如何向你表白衷肠 but I can't speak it out

淡薄天涯版
问世间何物把我们彼此推向远方 The most distant way in the world
不是情意绵绵口难张 is not that I can't say I love you.
而是我心底缠绵的爱 It is after looking into my heart
愿与你到地老天荒I can't change my love.

修改稿
问世间何路最漫长 The most distant way in the world
不是情意绵绵口难张 is not that I can't say I love you.
而是我心底缠绵的爱 It is after looking into my heart
愿与你到地老天荒I can't change my love.

淡薄天涯版
问世间何物把我们彼此推向远方The most distant way in the world
不是我对你的爱情深意长 is not that I'm loving you.
而是你我虽相爱 It is in our love
心灵却天各一方 we are keeping between the distance.

修改稿
问世间何路最漫长The most distant way in the world
不是我对你情深意长 is not that I'm loving you.
而是你我虽相爱 It is in our love
心灵却天各一方 we are keeping between the distance.

淡薄天涯版
问世间何物把我们彼此推向远方The most distant way in the world
不是时空让我们泪眼相望 is not the distance across us.
而是当我们冲破世俗的隔阻 It is when we're breaking through the way
却不敢承认深爱对方 we deny the existance of love.

修改稿
问世间何路最漫长The most distant way in the world
不是时空让我们泪眼相望 is not the distance across us.
而是当我们冲破世俗的阻挡 It is when we're breaking through the way
却不敢承认深爱对方 we deny the existance of love.

淡薄天涯版
问世间何物把我们彼此推向远方 So the most distant way in the world
不是两棵孤树只能隔山对望 is not in two distant trees.
而是同源同根 It is the same rooted branches
却不能相依相偎, 叶茂花香 can't enjoy the co-existance.

修改稿
问世间何路最漫长 So the most distant way in the world
不是两棵孤树只能隔山对望 is not in two distant trees.
而是同源同根的树枝 It is the same rooted branches
却不能相依相偎, 叶茂花香 can't enjoy the co-existance

淡薄天涯版
问世间何物把我们彼此推向远方 So the most distant way in the world
不是 树枝朝着不同的方向is not in the being sepearated branches.
而是闪烁的星星 It is in the blinking stars
难以擦出耀眼的光芒 they can't burn the light.

修改稿
问世间何路最漫长 So the most distant way in the world
不是树枝朝着不同的方向is not in the being sepearated branches.
而是闪烁的星星 It is in the blinking stars
难以擦出耀眼的光芒 they can't burn the light.

淡薄天涯版
问世间何物把我们彼此推向远方 So the most distant way in the world
不是流星不够耀眼光亮 is not the burning stars.
而是一逝既过 It is after the light
留下的是一片黑夜茫茫 they can't be seen from afar.

修改稿
问世间何路最漫长 So the most distant way in the world
不是流星不够耀眼光亮 is not the burning stars.
而是一逝既过 It is after the light
留下的是一片黑夜茫茫 they can't be seen from afar.

淡薄天涯版
问世间何物把我们彼此推向远方 So the most distant way in the world
不是那瞬间即逝的光芒 is not the light that is fading away.
虽然我们同生在世 It is the coincidence of us
情缘却不在此生上 is not supposed for the love.

修改稿
问世间何路最漫长 So the most distant way in the world
不是那瞬间即逝的光芒 is not the light that is fading away.
而是我们虽同生在世 It is the coincidence of us
情缘却不在此生上 is not supposed for the love.

淡薄天涯版
问世间何物把我们彼此推向远方? So the most distant way in the world
只因我生为那自由的飞鸟,你是蛟龙在海底唤雨翻江
is the love between the fish and bird.
我在天空 One is flying at the sky,
你在海洋 the other is looking upon into the sea.

修改稿
问世间何路最漫长? So the most distant way in the world
是飞鸟和鱼儿爱到断肠is the love between the fish and bird.
一个展翅在蓝天 One is flying at the sky,
一个却深潜入海洋 the other is looking upon into the sea.