估计没有这两把刷子，只能在鸡蛋里努力地跳几根骨头来显示自己的英文高人一等了。嘿嘿。关于用语修辞方面的挑骨头俺就不评了，这方面没有统一标准，个人有个人喜欢的用词和风格，但一个语法上的挑错俺觉得很奇怪，就是下面这句

Did not I say that you were fraught with ruse?

直言纠正：The correct way to say this is “Did I not…”. Choice of words such as “fraught” makes it weird and inconstant stylistically with the rest of the poem which is very plain and simple.

我怎么觉得是直言把人家对的给改错了呢？英文里经常可以看到这样的句子，比如有首歌的歌名就是 Didn't i see you crying?  还有首歌叫 Didn't we almost have it all？难道是歌曲作词者英文太差，犯了直言所要纠正的语法错误？ 俺感到很迷惑不解。嘿嘿