他寫道：

Chimp and Homo S. are evolved in two parallel lines. It's stupid to think chimps are the ancestor of humans. The correct way of thinking is that Homo S. and Chimps share a common ancestor many million years ago and branched off in 2 different directions. (44 words)

你中文貼子讀起來正常，今天你用英文寫了兩句話，試着給你改一改。 作為練習，你的英文可以，從表達充分出發，還是用中文好。

我會這麼寫：

Chimp and homo are two independently evolved species. They may share a common ancestor and by no means is one the ancestor of the other. (24 words)

Note:

1. they evolved , instead of are evolved.

2. millions of years ago, instead of many million years ago.

3. 太羅嗦，重複，水分多， 讀起來讓人厭煩。