二流的语言，能否产生一流的哲学

这个问题似乎很难回答，首先需要一个轮廓清晰的理论，来定义和解释什么是一流和二流的语言，然后才谈得上，是否二流的花，可以结出一流的果

不过，有的时候感性，往往比理性更能直透本质，带给人富于震撼的启示，比如下面这一首歌的中英文对照和Comments ------ 意态由来画不成，入眼平生几曾有

庄子曰，天地与我并生，孟子云，万物皆备于我，人类语言是思维的工具，思想的载体，如果连语言都有所不备，乃至于残缺不全，那哲学之子，又情何以堪呢，罪过罪过，阿门阿门

Some Comments

Doreen Chai ：（中文有一个错字）衔泥护雏羽翼下，出处是《古诗十九首.东城高且长》思为双飞燕，衔泥巢君屋

Jue Wang ：The English translation is horrible

ΓΪΜΡΞΦ ΩΨΏ ：英文翻译一股子浓浓的塑料味，不是翻译的错，英文就这样，没有灵性，只能当个工具语言

Youths_Fire：Revised translation by me: （有人不服，再译如下）

恋你君子无暇，弃我鲜衣怒马，四方城里，十里灼灼桃花

Fallen in love with a busy gentleman，Abandoning my life of ease，Inside the four-walled  palace，Ten miles of peach flowers bloom

春风入梦拂开记忆的沙，宫城巍峨朱门启，过尽繁华，痛饮一场诉离话，四方城外，千里江山如画

The spring breeze enters my dreams, brushing away the sand in my memory，The crimson gate of the majestic palace opens，Living a life of prosperity，Drinking to pour out my worries，Outside the four-walled palace，Our land looks like a painting

半生疏离，一世知己，与你相守朱门里，春华秋实，冬来秋去，与你相伴孤城闭

Half a lifetime detached，Whole life as a confidant，Together with you inside the crimson gate，Winter comes and fall goes，Accompanying you inside the lonely enclosed palace

来生不做笼中鸟，翻飞绿柳啼红花，放歌须纵酒，执子之手同归家

In out next life, let us not be birds trapped inside a cage，Let us fly through the green willow leaves and sing on the red flowers，We shall drink as we sing，Holding your hand as we return home

来生可做双飞燕，携泥护雏羽翼下，风过也，声声急，梦醒锦屏绣罗幔，浮生长恨欢娱希

In our next life, we should be a pair of canaries，Protecting our children under our wings，The wind blows, sounding so anxious，Awoken from my dreams，I’m surrounded by embroidered screens and mantles，If only happiness could last a little longer

五叶一花 : 已经尽力便好，虽然，颇有一点用打狗棍书写兰亭序，或在粪土之墙上篆刻道德经的品相，叹为观止，不过大抵不是翻译的错，原汁原味的英文，画虎类犬，虽不中亦不远矣，过于苛责，于事无补，by the way，德译，法译，会好一点吗，或者lingua latīna，何不试试呢，阿门