他写道：

Chimp and Homo S. are evolved in two parallel lines. It's stupid to think chimps are the ancestor of humans. The correct way of thinking is that Homo S. and Chimps share a common ancestor many million years ago and branched off in 2 different directions. (44 words)

你中文贴子读起来正常，今天你用英文写了两句话，试着给你改一改。 作为练习，你的英文可以，从表达充分出发，还是用中文好。

我会这么写：

Chimp and homo are two independently evolved species. They may share a common ancestor and by no means is one the ancestor of the other. (24 words)

Note:

1. they evolved , instead of are evolved.

2. millions of years ago, instead of many million years ago.

3. 太罗嗦，重复，水分多， 读起来让人厌烦。