原創是最難的，你的底子很好，我中午消消食幫你稍微潤色一下你看喜不喜歡：）

風吹桃林滿樹花，
Wind blows peach blossom from the trees.

喜鵲枝頭叫喳喳。
Magpies are happily chirping on top of the branches.

果園的哥哥呀走了桃花運，
The young man in the orchard is in a romance.

姐妹三人都看上他。
Because three sisters all fall in love with him.（注1）

哎呀呀走了桃花運，
Oh my god, he is so lucky with the girls' love.

姐妹三人都看上他。
The three sisters are all admiring him.