原创是最难的，你的底子很好，我中午消消食帮你稍微润色一下你看喜不喜欢：）

风吹桃林满树花，
Wind blows peach blossom from the trees.

喜鹊枝头叫喳喳。
Magpies are happily chirping on top of the branches.

果园的哥哥呀走了桃花运，
The young man in the orchard is in a romance.

姐妹三人都看上他。
Because three sisters all fall in love with him.（注1）

哎呀呀走了桃花运，
Oh my god, he is so lucky with the girls' love.

姐妹三人都看上他。
The three sisters are all admiring him.