| 謝謝寶貝阿姨鼓勵, 十歲了,剛升五年級 |
| 送交者: 笑菡 2008月09月05日09:44:46 於 [海 二 代] 發送悄悄話 |
| 回 答: 寫的好,讀得更好(重貼) 由 maojjmm 於 2008-09-05 09:00:27 |
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這篇essay的開頭本來是這樣的:" Trip report! Trip report! Why do I have to write a trip report on every trip I took, so my mom can record it and post it on her blog, and let my voice be heard by strangers? Especially when the recorded voice doesn't even sound like mine!"
我看了說:"Very good, you expressed your true feelings!" 然後我說不可以post到blog, 但還是要寫. 他寫完了, 我們一起做了小的修改, 居然說可以 post到blog, 自己把第一段改了. 讀的時候也很快, 我錄了讓他自己聽, 看看象不象Audio Book里一樣好聽, 他自己也搖頭, 就儘量慢下來了. 我覺得這樣能夠幫助他在學校做presentation. |
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