此译文是送给贤妹的，请随意处置：）很抱歉愚兄才疏学浅，无法将其译为韵文。
第二句中文原词中的文理错误，在英文中也无法掩饰。
主语从前面的单数改到最后的复数，是不是从单唱改为合唱？英译文应该也能唱，如对句子的长短有其他要求，请告知。


Let me look one more time into your eyes of clarity, where live in so many dreams and fantasies of purity.
I'd like to use the warmth of my bosom, to drive away the coldness, and to illuminate the darkness.
We are linked by the veins of our blood, and bound with the utter devotion of our hearts.
Shed forever are our tears; observed forever is our faith.
What we cannot suffer for you, is the pain you have endured.
God Bless our ancestors' home to survive all of the calamities.


Let me look one more time into your eyes with fog, where hide behind so many unfulfilled wishes.
I'd like so much to carry on your nostalgia, to send it to the constellations, and to deliver it to the mountains and rivers.
We are linked by the veins of our blood, and bound with the utter devotion of our hearts.
Shed forever are our tears; observed forever is our faith.
What we cannot suffer for you, is the pain you have endured.
God Bless our ancestors' home to survive all of the calamities.

Let me look one more time into your eyes of benevolence, where remain not the slightest regrets.
I'd like so much to hold in hands your courage, to engrave it in the vast land, to spread it across the cloudy sky.
We are linked by the veins of our blood, and bound with the utter devotion of our hearts.
Shed forever are our tears; observed forever is our faith.
What we cannot suffer for you, is the pain you have endured.
God Bless our ancestors' home to survive all of the calamities.